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all of Life is a rental but that does not mean one cannot appreciate the beauty and experience. control and ownership of Life hampers the Creative and stifles the Mystery and Wonder of Life. open the windows and doors and enjoy your view from your Room.

  • Last seen on Jun 16 6:13 PM. Member since October 28, 2007.
  • I am a 41 year old man from Colorado (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm waiting to write..
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  • I feel really inadequate to speak about this work. this poem doesn't need to be campaigned for - any one who reads this and is not moved - well, they are one of many walking dead.

  • I have always loved this poem. relationships just don't happen. they are created and then have to be sustained. I love the last two lines, especially "We even flew a little."

  • on Put Out My Eyes by Rainer Maria Rilke, on October 31, 2007
    the very human need to feel greater than - to go beyond our physical limitations into the limitless.

  • on As I dozed by Ono no Komachi, on October 31, 2007
    to express longing in such a way that there is still some kind of comfort, shows the poet's true open heart.