Old Poetry Old Poetry Poetry Poets Essays Forums

Myrataal

My other items

1 - 3 of 700   Show all
  • Unnatural Ending at allpoetry
    Reason for divorce?
  • Desert Art at allpoetry
    We know
    each other,
  • Cycle at allpoetry
    when rain falls, and storm has crushed
    to silence wrought from gale and mud

Visitor Book

Subject:

Comments

1 - 4 of 65535   Show all
  • It is softly sensual and lovely in imagery -- what a gentle seductive invitation! Especially the last two exit lines, 13 and 14.

    Myra

  • Divine

    A poem filled with remorse, but beautiful simplicity wrote complex emotions. I especially loved the lyrical elements in here, making it a sad breeze touching the (weeping) willows.

    Also: the lovely reference to, firstly, "snow-white feet" and secondly, "snow-white hand" breathes of purity and of tenderness; of walking in grace and of gentle touch. Yet, as snow, the connection was cold and could not convey its intended warmth. Thus, the poet mourned the loss ...

    Myra

  • on Song Of Despair by Pablo Neruda, on July 24, 2005
    Such utter sadness and sorrow in this piece -- the agony of lost love ...

    My heart churned on reading this.

    Myra

  • on Poetry by Pablo Neruda, on July 24, 2005
    Nobody could have said this better than Pablo Neruda himself ... Such utter seamlessness of though. Singing a note with clarity and with preciseness: such is writing poetry.

    Myra