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  • on Tulips by Sylvia Plath, on July 19, 2005
    I only wanted
    To lie with my hands turned up and be utterly empty.
    Shouldn't this be '...my hands to be turned up...'
    or '...and to be utterly empty.'?
    shouldn't 'I hve no face' be 'I have no face?'
    I wonder if the interesting dead girl would please correct these few little things.
    Or someone please come along and make hve have.
    Sylvia Plath. What an incredibly resonant figure.

  • on 8 Count by Charles Bukowski, on February 27, 2005
    I really enjoy that he expresses his embitterment so eloquently by calling the reader a fucker.

  • So often you know something's wrong, but can't explain why. This speaks for so many people, and other creatures as well. What a lovely way to give them a voice.

  • on Men by Dr. Maya Angelou, on November 12, 2003
    This is a wonderful and insightful piece. Such a sense of truth, with no sugar coating. Bare naked truth. So strong and vulnerable simultaneously. Too sharp I'm sure for many to digest.