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The Beautiful Poem

I go to bed in Los Angeles thinking
about you.

Pissing a few moments ago
I looked down at my penis
affectionately.

Knowing it has been inside
you twice today makes me
feel beautiful.

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  • September 9, 2007
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    From guest sooz (contact)
    this is beautiful, succinct, a moment in the mind of a man in love. I felt beautiful reading it.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    February 28, 2006
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    On first reading it appears crude but when one reads the deeper meaning - it really is a wonderful thought.
    Von

  • ea
    July 7, 2005
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    This poem is so amazing.