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As The Sparrow

To give life you must take life,
and as our grief falls flat and hollow
upon the billion-blooded sea
I pass upon serious inward-breaking shoals rimmed
with white-legged, white-bellied rotting creatures
lengthily dead and rioting against surrounding scenes.
Dear child, I only did to you what the sparrow
did to you; I am old when it is fashionable to be
young; I cry when it is fashionable to laugh.
I hated you when it would have taken less courage
to love.

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  • July 1
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    From guest aesthete (contact)
    geniuse


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    September 19, 2008

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    wonderful

    the poem is a brief lesson of the love of humanity, the last line is simply great"I hated you when it would have taken less courage to love."

  • kyew
    September 1, 2005
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    a unique perspective on humanity and socially expected emotions