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Sea Lullaby

The old moon is tarnished
With smoke of the flood,
The dead leaves are varnished
With colour like blood.

A treacherous smiler
With teeth white as milk,
A savage beguiler
In sheathings of silk

The sea creeps to pillage,
She leaps on her prey;
A child of the village
Was murdered today.

She came up to meet him
In a smooth golden cloak,
She choked him and beat him
to death, for a joke.

Her bright locks were tangled,
She shouted for joy
With one hand she strangled
A strong little boy.

Now in silence she lingers
Beside him all night
To wash her long fingers
In silvery light.

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  • November 20, 2006
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    Gory poem, what does it mean to wash her long fingers in silvery light.

  • Nam
    February 12, 2005
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    I feel 'brittany' above was more close to what I feel this is truly about than the other two. I feel without the title one would conclude their opinions endlessly, but I feel, like in some of her other works, that this is metaphorical.

    I feel she is speaking about a storm, a ship is in the storm, and the storm is destroying the boat. From reading a past piece of hers, her 'husband' - 'boyfriend' .. something, whatever, was a sailor on a boat and she dreamed if he would ever come home, and she dreamed that he would and she dreamed in that blissful state.

    I feel this relays on that one, that here she's dreaming that he doesn't, and why? Because the Sea has taken him away.

    I feel the first two verses is solely speaking about the Moon and how the Moon controls the sea -- which it does by the by. It's not a 'full moon' but a 'crescent moon' that is out and it's 'smiling' at the hacov it's about to cause.

    'A child of the village' I feel that is metaphorical for the 'ship' or 'boat' whichever, as being the 'child'.

    The end representing the 'calm' after the storm. My interpretation.

    A good piece that Wylie has written here.


  • Gothic pixie
    January 31, 2005
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    I liked this....i think she is saying that yes a boy is killed....not a specific person killed him...but ya i liked it a lot!!


    (*)Pixie(*)


  • January 31, 2005
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    in this poem is she talking about someone being killed or ?....


  • December 22, 2004
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    is she talkin about a boy being dround or a boat being sank