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Sea Calm

How still,
How strangely still
The water is today,
It is not good
For water
To be so still that way.

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  • Bettylou
    July 5, 2006
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    Wonderful and a little ominous

    I disagree with buggirl - the poem is more unsettling than cute. Ever been by the ocean just before a storm?


    • Charley Noble Moderators member
      July 5, 2006
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      What Will Come?

      BettyLou-

      I agree with you. The sea can be quiet, too quiet...

      Charley Noble


  • buggirl
    May 5, 2004
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    this is very short, but nice nonetheless. I like the cutesy rhyme it has to it.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    May 5, 2004
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    1932 is the closest date I can find for this poem.
    ~Von~


  • May 5, 2004
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    when ws this peom written?