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Winter Landscape, With Rooks

Water in the millrace, through a sluice of stone,
plunges headlong into that black pond
where, absurd and out-of-season, a single swan
floats chaste as snow, taunting the clouded mind
which hungers to haul the white reflection down.

The austere sun descends above the fen,
an orange cyclops-eye, scorning to look
longer on this landscape of chagrin;
feathered dark in thought, I stalk like a rook,
brooding as the winter night comes on.

Last summer's reeds are all engraved in ice
as is your image in my eye; dry frost
glazes the window of my hurt; what solace
can be struck from rock to make heart's waste
grow green again? Who'd walk in this bleak place?

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  • feedmephish
    June 24, 2004
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    wow, that was a really cool poem.

  • Goss98
    June 20, 2004
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    This is the kind of poem you come back to. I love "a single swan
    floats chaste as snow, " and "The austere sun descends above the fen,/an orange cyclops-eye, scorning". This kind of originality makes a poem interesting, and you want to come back to it.