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The thing comes
of itself

         (Look up
to see
         the cat & the squirrel,
                        the one
torn, a red thing,
                   & the other
somehow immaculate

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  • Cristos
    March 17, 2004
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    That sums it up I think...But I wonder why the (brackets) are not closed in the end.. Perhaps a little editing boo boo? Still, on the work itself, I'll be looking for the immaculate something for a while..
    Peace
    Chris