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Although they are

Although they are
only breath, words
which I command
are immortal

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  • November 10, 2006
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    From guest caitlin (contact)
    im doin a paper on this poem....i need to find a song that its lyrics have the same message...can anyone help me?

  • MindOphelia
    October 27, 2005
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    I feel that the rest of this is lost to us forever. As said in the biography, much of her work is lost. I find these lines ironic: "words
    which I command
    are immortal"
    her work was almost lost, but we still have fragments. Beautiful fragments.

  • Grasshopper
    July 8, 2005
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    Sappho has this amazing ability to says mountains with her few words. Simply beautiful!!!

  • petal
    April 12, 2005
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    beautiful

  • Portinari
    February 2, 2005
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    I'm going to agree what just about every one who responded before me and say that she did seem to know how much her words were worth. But I have this nagging feeling that she might have meant something more, although it could be that I'm just putting too much thought into this.


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    November 26, 2004
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    I agree with glazecovered…She definitely knew her worth...even Plato has used her words in his dialogue.

  • glazecovered
    July 1, 2004
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    They were only a breath, until they were written down for us to read and be inspired by. This is not a poem but rather a statement about herself. She certainly knew her worth and the words that came out of her mouth meant much to her. Can all of us say that what we say shall be immortal?
    ~Anastasia

  • HoldMe
    February 23, 2004
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    A very strong piece...wonderful and it definitely has a lot of feeling in it...short, but quite alot seemed to have been sad and so many emotions expressed in the short, few seconds it took to read that poem...sometimes short poems like that can be so much better in so many ways than poems that are long and drawn out, so that by the time you finish reading it you end up forgetting what the first word was...all in all, a very nice piece.

  • Ava Noire
    May 21, 2003
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    perfection:D

  • Nam
    April 12, 2003
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    9/10

    I like the 'Although they are only breath' that parts such holds so much imagery. It can mean many things and then again, it can just mean a few things and the follow through follows through quite elequently.

    A great piece here.

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