With his venom
irresistible
and bittersweet
that loosener
of limbs, Love
reptile-like
strikes me down
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Very simple and to the point. Its flow is smooth and perfect; it flows gently and smoothly and pleasant to the tongue and the mind. A lovley poem, well-written, and truly worth the read.
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9/10
Like the form, and the gentle way each line goes to the next one. It is quite a lovely piece here.
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