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As the Team's Head- Brass


As the team's head-brass flashed out on the turn
The lovers disappeared into the wood.
I sat among the boughs of the fallen elm
That strewed the angle of the fallow, and
Watched the plough narrowing a yellow square
Of charlock. Every time the horses turned
Instead of treading me down, the ploughman leaned
Upon the handles to say or ask a word,
About the weather, next about the war.
Scraping the share he faced towards the wood,
And screwed along the furrow till the brass flashed
Once more.

The blizzard felled the elm whose crest
I sat in, by a woodpecker's round hole,
The ploughman said. 'When will they take it away? '
'When the war's over.' So the talk began –
One minute and an interval of ten,
A minute more and the same interval.
'Have you been out? ' 'No.' 'And don't want to, perhaps? '
'If I could only come back again, I should.
I could spare an arm, I shouldn't want to lose
A leg. If I should lose my head, why, so,
I should want nothing more…Have many gone
From here? ' 'Yes.' 'Many lost? ' 'Yes, a good few.
Only two teams work on the farm this year.
One of my mates is dead. The second day
In France they killed him. It was back in March,
The very night of the blizzard, too. Now if
He had stayed here we should have moved the tree.'
'And I should not have sat here. Everything
Would have been different. For it would have been
Another world.' 'Ay, and a better, though
If we could see all all might seem good.' Then
The lovers came out of the wood again:
The horses started and for the last time
I watched the clods crumble and topple over
After the ploughshare and the stumbling team.

Notes

the teams head brass - the brass ornaments on the horses bridles
Charlock: wild mustard, a yellow weed
out:   on active service in France

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  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    January 31, 2006
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    The war may not seem to be present but it is waiting in the background as a silent presence, the ploughman speaks to the young man of war, he tells of a friend, who, had he not been killed would have moved the tree trunk the young people are sitting on.
    Even in a beautiful, peaceful English countryside environment the War is still greatly in evidence.
    A most beautiful and poignant piece of poetry.

    Von
    Edited on Jan 31, 7:33 p.m. because ''.


  • November 15, 2005
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    sad and thoughtful... passing time and passing thoughts; earth being tilled by ploughs and by war. tranquility vs. mortar and lovers vs. snipers.

  • Edale
    May 26, 2004
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    this is cool