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Love The Wild Swan

"I hate my verses, every line, every word.
Oh pale and brittle pencils ever to try
One grass-blade's curve, or the throat of one bird
That clings to twig, ruffled against white sky.
Oh cracked and twilight mirrors ever to catch
One color, one glinting
Hash, of the splendor of things.
Unlucky hunter, Oh bullets of wax,
The lion beauty, the wild-swan wings, the storm of the wings."
—This wild swan of a world is no hunter's game.
Better bullets than yours would miss the white breast
Better mirrors than yours would crack in the flame.
Does it matter whether you hate your . . . self?
At least Love your eyes that can see, your mind that can
Hear the music, the thunder of the wings. Love the wild swan.

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  • Nam
    May 23, 2004
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    This sounded, to me, like an old classical piece that may have been lost at one time but was newly found. That's the sound I got out of this, and from that sound, the images of this piece just feel in-line.

    It's a good piece written by the author, gives a good image and the music is to my ears.


  • Jacki D
    May 20, 2004
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    Another wonderful piece.The ones such as these are drawing me into spending a little more time in OP everyday.

  • Ava Noire
    May 20, 2004
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    If I could applaud this piece -- I most certainly would.