A bee
staggers out
of the peony.
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simplicity at its best yet so deep too
the bee "drunk" on nectar speaks to me about obsession, compulsion and desire -
Drunk with the delight in his work, and accomplishing something at the same time — could anyone ask for more?
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Oh my! That is so cute! Love the imagery in this haiku. It is so child-like and tender. Excellent light-heartedness in this write.
Charishma -
and she heads home to tell of her treasure - this is so lovely.
Von -
wonderful
it is as simple as one plus one -
Interesting...this perhaps has a connotation of treachery or poison. This poem consists only of three lines, yet it is much more beneath.
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