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The Blues

When the shoe strings break
On both your shoes
And you're in a hurry-
That's the blues.

When you go to buy a candy bar
And you've lost the dime you had-
Slipped through a hole in your pocket somewhere-
That's the blues, too, and bad!

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  • flying horses
    June 6, 2006
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    Loved this one

    Ain't life a bitch???????????

  • Unique
    February 20, 2006
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    I say that the poem may be very straightforward, but I think that there lies a double meaning. Something like, Life isn't fair, but we've got to tough it out and live on anyways. That's what I interpret from

    That's the blues, too, and bad!


  • poetryality Moderators member
    August 11, 2005
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    Langston in his richly keen awareness knew the Blues for sure. I love the line;

    Slipped through a hole in your pocket somewhere-

    I have honestly had that happen! LOL

    Renee

  • pozo
    September 19, 2004
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    Wow- this is such a powerful poem, especially because of its title. One would expect it to be about music, which in a sense is quite glamourous but it shows you the grim reality of life that blues music played. This poem made me think.


  • July 2, 2003
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    This poem seems so simple on the surface. Is there a deeper meaning to it and if so what is it?

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