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Love & Fame & Death

it sits outside my window now
like and old woman going to market;
it sits and watches me,
it sweats nervously
through wire and fog and dog-bark
until suddenly
I slam the screen with a newspaper
like slapping at a fly
and you could hear the scream
over this plain city,
and then it left.

the way to end a poem
like this
is to become suddenly
quiet.

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  • poetryality Moderators member
    March 10, 2005
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    What more could possibly be said. The ending was stellar! LOL

    Renee


  • May 11, 2003
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    Hehehe. the way to end a poem
    like this
    is to become suddenly
    quiet. I agree Mr. Bukowski, I agree.

    Jenna