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Unaware of my crime
          they stood me in the dock.

I was sentenced to life….
                           without her.

Strange trial.
         No judge.
         No jury.

I wonder who my visitors will be.

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  • Papagallo
    April 12

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    Without Spike to tell us who knows. Just who gave him the sentence to life without her? The more I read this verse the more confused I become.


    • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
      April 21
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      To me this seems so obvious. A loved one has died (mother, sister, sweetheart who knows) but the survivor is left behind to live a life alone. Sentenced to life without her...
      For all his apparent idiocy Milligan could pen some beautiful thoughts and, to my mind, this is one of them.
      Jim


  • February 12
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    dont get it

    From guest rock lee (contact)
    i wish i knew more about poetry. what's with the spacing? i wrote something similar about a year ago but the spacing wasnt like this. any help?


    • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
      February 13
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      Who knows what Spike actually intended with his spacing and punctuation here!
      For me, I use it as a guide when reading. The longer the space the longer the pause in reading. I think it gives it a quizical, whimsical feeling.
      Jim

  • un34rth3d
    October 29, 2007
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    could possibly be his wife/gf or something along those lines


  • October 27, 2007
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    meaning

    From guest jan (contact)
    is this talking about a childhood without a mother??


  • June 28, 2007
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    not again

    From guest Patric T-Man (contact)
    uve been to jail?????


  • February 27, 2007
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    Interesting

    From guest Peter (contact)
    This is pure existentialism. It's like a distilled version of Kafka's 'The Trial'. It speaks a lot about Milligan's mind and his view on the purpose (or lack of it) of human existence.


  • February 13, 2007
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    Wow

    From guest Nicholas (contact)
    Spike Milligan (from what i've read so far), is a really funny man, but in a really strange way. He takes (what i'm assuming is a break up or death or sumthing) and makes it funny, and sad and true all at the same time.

  • Meggh Malignant
    November 19, 2006
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    This is really strange, I really don't understand it.

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