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The taste
of rain
—Why kneel?

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  • March 22
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    poems

    From guest miranda (contact)
    sweeeeet


  • November 12, 2008
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    From guest nic (contact)
    damnit i enjoyed this


  • September 20, 2008
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    Thank YOu for your Words Peoples,Apples

    From guest Havard (contact)
    second edition to this as reborn incarnated. No joke,spiderman A mistake stumbles into samsara , desert rain


  • PetrifiedAfforded
    March 11, 2007

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    a dash by what we can't stash?

    The amusing sentence was accomplished to me by sending out laughter when it can be emotional. Lighting for it was in how we have heart not just with sunshine but balance. By this, a verse pops in mind about such provisions being put forth to both choices of what type of people we want to be, short-term temptingly thought or grateful to find length. I wouldn't gather cynicalness from any of these lines, of coolness to be looked at without coldness.

    There is too the resonance of maybe scooping a dip from a clear clean river so to speak as careful travelers have.

  • Alahmorah
    August 27, 2006
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    I love Jack...I've read his book of haikus, and I must say that I enjoyed them all. Beautiful.
    Love and Blessings, Ashlee

  • TygerSiren
    December 4, 2005
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    and such true beauty would not want us to kneel, but to commune with it.


  • July 27, 2005
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    hmm...

  • Smilingspider
    May 28, 2004
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    Why indeed as a drop of rain is a beauty in and of itself
    our metaphysical God.

  • Joshuacrisel
    May 18, 2004
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    this is really good great job on this it was so short but right to the point i really liked this alot and u have some good things going on here great write and i will be reading more

  • forgottentreasure
    May 18, 2004
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    i love Jack---we need more of him on this website...he is amazing!!!! "why kneel?" ah, me...it is so outsanding and powerful..

    sigh..i love jack.

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