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Sadie And Maud

Maud went to college.
Sadie stayed home.
Sadie scraped life
With a fine toothed comb.

She didn't leave a tangle in
Her comb found every strand.
Sadie was one of the livingest chicks
In all the land.

Sadie bore two babies
Under her maiden name.
Maud and Ma and Papa
Nearly died of shame.

When Sadie said her last so-long
Her girls struck out from home.
(Sadie left as heritage
Her fine-toothed comb.)

Maud, who went to college,
Is a thin brown mouse.
She is living all alone
In this old house.

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  • October 23
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    what does livingest mean

    From guest Avrils mom (contact)
    above

    ("Livingest" might mean "lived life to the most" Old Poetry Staff)


  • August 6
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    nice

    From guest snigdha (contact)
    is it a narrative poem?


  • February 17
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    poem

    From guest dominique (contact)
    i love this poem i am doing a project on it for my black poet poem i mean i love this poem


  • April 24, 2007
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    Avril?

    From guest Onyx Dragon Slayer (contact)
    Avril Lavigne?? is that YOU?! wooooow. im your biggest fan i love your music!!!

  • Diamond
    August 14, 2004
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    I liked this poem, if I had to choose between the two women, I would choose to be Sadie, at least she lived her life. Avril

  • Heart-a-Gold
    May 21, 2004
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    I like this poem.. Being a young mom and unable (so far) to go to college... I'm sadie!!!

    And of course, beautifully written, and done..


  • April 25, 2004
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    Wow! What an ironic poem!


  • April 14, 2004
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    i like sadie and maud if anyone would like to reply or e-mail me about what their thoughts of the poem are i would be very greatful. yourgoodbuddrew@hotmail.com