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Love's Calling

QUIETLY as rosebuds  
 Talk to thin air,  
Love came so lightly  
 I knew not he was there.  
 
Quietly as lovers          
 Creep at the middle noon,  
Softly as players tremble  
 In the tears of a tune;  
 
Quietly as lilies  
 Their faint vows declare,          
Came the shy pilgrim:  
 I knew not he was there.  
 
Quietly as tears fall  
 On a warm sin,  
Softly as griefs call          
 In a violin;  
 
Without hail or tempest,  
 Blue sword or flame,  
Love came so lightly  
 I knew not that he came.

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  • Unbridled1
    November 11, 2004
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    Love can often be like that...no huge fireworks or bangs to alert...but quietly slipping in...as if on kitty cat's paws. Neilson speaks so softly to this in this piece.


    UB


  • February 12, 2004
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    Outstanding poet

    John Shaw Neilson is one of Australia's greatest poets he composed such beautiful poems yet due to his failing sight in his old age he had to practically give up writing, Neilson lost many of his poems destroyed by mice during a mice plague in the Mallee, this poem 'Love's calling' is a typical Neilson poem so beautifuly written,