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Elegy

I know but will not tell
you, Aunt Irene, why there
are soap suds in the whiskey:
Uncle Robert had to have
A drink while shaving.

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  • February 23, 2004
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    There's more to it. Where's the rest of the poem?

  • Ava Noire
    December 31, 2003
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    He got drunk while shaving and killed himself? Hmmmmmm. His shaving material doesn't matter. This confuzzles me :S


  • December 31, 2003
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    Thought provoking. Wish there was another verse.

    I seems to me that he/she said Aunt Irene would not br told and
    then proceded to admit to Uncle Robert's shaving and drinking.
    I wonder what was his shaving material? Gel,cream,soap stick?
    Also, what was he drinking? And why can"t Irene know the facts?

  • Pari Ali
    December 29, 2003
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    Yes it is funny, the poets supposedly not telling and yets tells. I wonder if aunt Irene was a termagent? one can't help feeling a bit sorry for uncle Robert why did he need the drink in the first place and would aunt Irene make his life miserable? poor man was he married to a nag and at the end of his tether? or was she his maiden sister always telling him what to do? so many scenarios come to the mind, and I do wonder if he shaved with the whiskey and drank the shaving water instead. how did the soap suds get into the whiskey unless he dipped his shaving brush in it. a thoroughly delightful little poem. Why is it called Elegy?
    Edited on Dec 29, 3:40 p.m. because ''.

  • Renegade Hobo
    December 26, 2003
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    There is not much said, but I agree with AndrewHide... it is a bit humorous. I liked this poem.

    ~'Chelle


  • AndrewHide
    September 8, 2003
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    Although very little is said in this piece, so much is implied.
    This brief scene could be the setting for thousands of stories, so strong is the picture. I can't help but smile when reading this, the characters are vividly real and loverble.

    Andrew

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