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Weep You No More, Sad Fountains

Weep you no more, sad fountains;
      What need you flow so fast?
    Look how the snowy mountains
      Heaven's sun doth gently waste.
      But my sun's heavenly eyes
        View not your weeping,
        That now lies sleeping
      Softly, now softly lies
        Sleeping.

    Sleep is a reconciling,
    A rest that peace begets:
  Doth not the sun rise smiling
    When fair at even he sets?
      Rest you then, rest, sad eyes,
      Melt not in weeping,
      While she lies sleeping
      Softly, now softly lies
      Sleeping.

Notes

First recorded in 16th century

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  • Morag
    May 24
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    Touching, poignant, beautiful. It is unusual for its use of 'feminine' rhymes (mountains, fountains - the last syllable unaccented so you have to rhyme two). It is hard to do this in English without sounding funny. They are mostly found in humorous poems.

  • Masroor
    October 27, 2008

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    Strong, vivid imagery, deep meanings, and a strong flow made this poem what it is, an art. Beautiful!


  • July 23, 2007
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    softly ,, it takes my breath

    From guest guidy (contact)
    i liked it first because of the music it was presented in the movie ,,i read it over and over .. it touches me every time..


  • April 24, 2007
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    From guest Ida (contact)
    I simply adore this poem. It's so sweet and soft. A little diamond, I would say!


  • November 27, 2006
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    Sense and Sensibility

    From guest Debbie Kim (contact)
    I love how Patrick Doyle took the same exact lyrics and made it into a lovely song that Jane Eaglen sang in the movie!!!

  • FacelessChrist
    September 25, 2003
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    This poem is an exquisite representation of how a poem should be. The rhyming scheme is quite unique, in fact its untouchable. ABACDEEDE, very clever, in the second stanza, though I suppose the first was unintentional, it rhymes like so ABABCDDCD, which is a much better scheme than the first. This poem is indeed well done.