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Oil And Blood

IN tombs of gold and lapis lazuli
Bodies of holy men and women exude
Miraculous oil, odour of violet.
But under heavy loads of trampled clay
Lie bodies of the vampires full of blood;
Their shrouds are bloody and their lips are wet.

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  • UrbanGothicVamp
    September 16, 2004
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    this is one of my favourite poems to date so good actually written on my bedroom wall.

  • le moi
    February 9, 2004
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    This was quite lovely. This sort of remind me of books that Anne Rice's writes now. It kind of remind me of the Vampire Lestat, Queen of the Damned, Blood and Gold. They all deal with the vampire that lives off the offerings of sacrfise in temples to God. And they themselves cloak themselves with the god's guise. They usually slaughtered the worshippers. And feast upon their blood. lol For some strange feelings, I felt this in this poem.
    -Tainted Princess


  • December 4, 2003
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    vampies souls

    Lying alone in the dark
    I feast on the fears
    On my own troubled mind
    Sipping full rein
    With the demons of uncertainty
    That dance in delight

    At the silent drop of a tear
    Running down my face
    As I feel the sting
    Of razor sharp claws
    As they plunge with lethal purpose
    Deep inside my tender heart

    Ripping and tearing
    Until all that’s left
    Are jagged remains
    The pulsing of my life’s blood slows
    Until the last drop

    Is expelled from my body
    The urgent whispers and pleadings
    Of my spirit draw silent
    As I’m entombed in
    The sound of sadness