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"I wandered lonely as a cloud"


I wandered lonely as a cloud
  That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
  A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
  And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
  Along the margin of a bay:
The thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
  Outdid the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
  In such a jocund company:
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
  In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
  Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

Notes

The picture is of daffodils at Ullswater. In 1802 William and Dorothy Wordsworth's visited Glencoyne Park. On 15th April 1802, they passed the strip of land at Glencoyne Bay, called Ullswater.
It is this visit that gave Wordsworth the inspiration to write this famous poem.

*Excerpt from Dorothy's journal:

'When we were in the woods beyond Gowbarrow Park, we saw a few daffodils close to the water side. We fancied that the lake had floated the seed ashore and that the little colony had so sprung up. But as we went along there were more and more and at last under the boughs of the trees, we saw that there was a long belt of them along the shore, about the breadth of a country turnpike road.
I never saw daffodils so beautiful they grew among the mossy stones about and about them, some rested their heads upon these stones as on a pillow for weariness and the rest tossed and reeled and danced and seemed as if they verily laughed with the wind that blew upon them over the lake, they looked so gay ever dancing ever changing.

This wind blew directly over the lake to them. There was here and there a little knot and a few stragglers a few yards higher up but they were so few as not to disturb the simplicity and unity and life of that one busy highway. We rested again and again. The Bays were stormy, and we heard the waves at different distances and in the middle of the water like the sea'.

Dorothy Wordsworth, The Grasmere Journal - Thursday 15 April 1802.

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  • AmyPixiStix
    June 30

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    i really enjoyed this poem, it was calming and wonderful, i loved the flow of it, the rhyme was wonderful ~Amy


  • hamid
    June 30
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    Beautifull

    Beautifull Expresstion of thoughts, and lovely combination of Daffodils and happiness,


  • May 22
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    "I wandered lonely as a cloud"

    From guest Judie (contact)
    the first verse has always been memorised and i always think of it when i see daffodils but i always need to read for the rest ...such a butiful poem


  • April 5
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    From guest lianonsidhe (contact)
    A childhood favourite, serenely beautiful. The inward eye is such a blessing to us in our 'lonely cloud' times, it is how we recall such treasures as we have seen.

  • Serene
    March 29

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    It's so wonderfully worded, and such a way to view the self in this piece, a lonely cloud, where the heart is set in the midst of nature's wanderings. It really takes one there! I was really moved to this moment in time. ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH!!!


  • December 12, 2007
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    mneah.

    From guest Xena Scopel (contact)
    its okay. not really my cup of tea.


  • August 16, 2007
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    simply beautiful

    From guest tanya alleyne (contact)
    of all the words i can conquer up i can only say simply beautiful it is soul quenching simply beautiful from a fellow poet


  • July 18, 2007
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    Awesome

    From guest Warren (contact)
    This poem is just awesome and heart touching.....

  • Talloaks
    January 21, 2007

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    i CAN VISUALIZE THE DAFFODILS EVERY WHERE. oNE OF MY FAVORITE FLOWERS. TO ME IT'S A SIGN OF SPRING.

  • Talloaks
    January 21, 2007
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    WONDERFUL

  • Scott Atha
    January 11, 2007
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    Simply beauitiful

    If we could all see the simple beauty in life as we pass. And dream of them forever.


  • December 2, 2006
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    daffodils

    From guest sreya & teena (contact)
    a very good poem

  • enthralledforever
    October 23, 2006
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    Question: If Wordsworth visited Ullswater with Dorothy and not alone, then why does he write I wandered lonely as a cloud..?

    To increase the dramatic impact, I think.

    Loved the last stanza!




    There's an error in line 12:
    Should be "ten thousand" not "the thousand"!

  • Sharcu
    August 5, 2006
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    Wonderful poem! Loved reading this one by William. Rhyming was good as well

  • Carlaaay
    June 1, 2006
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    We read this in my English class and ripped it apart. "Fluttering and dancing in the breeze?" How cliche and lame can you be! Makes me sick.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    January 4, 2006
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    Thank You for picking up on the typo Prince, sometimes they escape us and we appreciate it so much when we are given the opportunity to correct it.

    Thanks again

    Von
    Oldpoetry Team

  • P r i n c e
    January 3, 2006
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    Ahhh!!! What makes you thinks we mortals are worthy of commenting on Wordsworth. But please please be careful when posting the poems of such great poets, and change the fourth line in the third stanza from

    'SICH a jocund company' to

    'SUCH a jocund company'
    Edited on Jan 03, 10:16 p.m. because ''.

  • lencio-sunchild
    September 21, 2005
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    How I wish you would have read this comment which tells how much I love this piece of work, as a child it was my favourite and it remained so until now. I used to love memorising it. It was and is how my life is exactly, and nature always fills my heart with joy, not merely daffodils.

    William Wordsworth your name will always live with me with your daffodils!!!


  • asinnerliketherest
    May 24, 2005
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    I believe the title for this work is actually "I wandered lonely as a cloud" and not "The Daffodils" as the focus is not on the daffodils, but is rather a lyrical ballad reflecting on one's relationship with inner and outer self. At least, that's the way it appears in English text, I believe.

    This guy is really something else. Arguably the the greatest romantic poet of all time, certainly the most notable of his time and one of my favourites.

  • fragrance
    April 15, 2005
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    I simply love it.An excellent poem,fantastic,brilliant whenever i read this poem some unsusual sounds seems to me well just read the last lines of the poem;
    The flash upon that inward wye
    Which is the bliss of solitude;
    And then my heart with pleasure fills,
    And dances with the daffodils.
    lovely poem.

  • janstar
    January 7, 2005
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    One of the most beautiful pieces of poetry ever written. Clearly a masterpiece.

  • Daydream.Believer
    December 17, 2004
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    This poem is so beautiful. I can close my eyes and see exactly what he is describing... and I have felt the exact same way, for I have witnessed almost the exact same thing. It really is breathtaking and blissful. I have seen daffodils dance, and it really is amazing. A very beautiful and well done poem that captures the essence of the feeling of witnessing dancing daffodils.


  • phatalvision Moderators member
    September 1, 2004
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    A beautiful poem. The last stanza shows how moving the experience must have been. The power to relive a pleasant memory over and over in the mind is a blessing indeed.


  • cutiepie
    August 30, 2004
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    I am pleased to say that when I was at school, this poem was on the "Have to read and learn list "

  • blondeoverblue
    May 31, 2004
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    What a sense of tranquility, that such a simple flower could inspire such beautiful and evocative language.

  • sanity
    May 31, 2004
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    This poem always seems to relax me, I love it, I think this is the poem that really got me into writing poetry, it is so calming, I have always loved this piece, I think it will be loved by many for years to come, a wonderful image this conjures even without the picture..................

    sanity.

  • Pari Ali
    May 5, 2004
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    It is strange how the beauty of this poem never fails to enchant.

  • skreaminsosound
    March 19, 2004
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    Thats pretty amazing, AndrewHide! This is a beautiful piece...I love the last stanza. Its amazingly well written...I've honestly never read Wordsworth before, but I will definitely be back. I'm at a loss for words.

    A/E/S


  • AndrewHide
    March 19, 2004
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    Writen two hundred years ago today,
    to mark this anniversary, 266000 children across England will simutaniously read out this poem at 09.15 GMT, lead by the current poet laureate Andrew Motion.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    January 24, 2004
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    I have always felt at peace when reading this poem - not only are they my favourite flower, so simple and yet so beautiful, they bring back so many happy memories of my life in England, where I once 'danced with the daffodils'
    Thank you Mr Wordsworth
    ~Von~


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    January 18, 2004
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    Beauty

    " wandered lonely as a cloud
    That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
    When all at once I saw a crowd,
    A host, of golden daffodils; "
    this poem is the signature of wordsworth. Sweet like honey. Flowing like a stream and lovely like daffodils.

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