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A dewdrop

A dewdrop
It is not, my heart, on a flower
Fallen; yet
With a breath of wind
My concern grows deeper.

Notes

Poetic form Tanka

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  • Ava Noire
    January 25, 2005
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    Complex tanka - very skillfully done.