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A secret it is

A secret it is, but
When I feel love rise,
From leg wearying
Mountains, the moon
Sets out, and so do I.

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  • blondeoverblue
    January 26, 2005
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    Interesting use of the word secret. Could suggest that the writer hides the fact that he finds the whole process of loving a weary one, that it is a long trek, emphasised by being taken in moonlight as opposed to sunlight.

  • Nam
    July 25, 2004
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    I find this piece to be a bit queer in a way. It's just so strange I feel, maybe it's the translation, who knows?

    I understand, I feel, the 'leg wearying Mountains' part, the journey it takes one 'man' to get to his love, and it takes a journey to get there, and the 'moon' will follow in the nights as the sun will follow in the days.

    I find it to mean a journey to find one's love.

    A good piece by Tsurayuki.