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Two Men and a Maid

Two little dudes from the George-street block,
  Up for a brief vacation!
One little girl in a neat print frock,
  Maid of the Mulga Station!
Two little dudes with walking-sticks,
Two little heads that the collars fix!
Two little hats at nine-and-six,
  Two little dudes on a station.

One little maid with a bashful smile,
  Given for a salutation;
Two little dudes of the nan-nan style,
  Bent on a captivation.
One little maid with a smile so true,
Curly hair of a nut-brown hue;
Eyes of a liquid violet blue,
  One little maid on a station.

“Didn’t she fear her walks to take
  Over the grassy clearing?”
“Didn’t she fear some nasty snake
  His ugly head a-rearing?”
“Sirs,” she said, with an arching brow,
And a smile that was hardly a smile somehow,
“There are so many jackasses ‘round here now,
  That the snakes are disappearing!”

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  • March 14, 2004
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    1211

    good

  • Jsharon
    March 4, 2004
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    Enjoyable and witty!!!

    I truly enjoyed this poem! The ending had me chuckling... so witty and wise!! Thanks for sharing this with me.. I have visited OldPoetry once before.. will be back when I can.. sharon

  • prairiegal
    February 20, 2004
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    excllent,funny,clever,great rhyme

    This was a wonderful poem. It was very funny and a very nice read for the early evening. Thanks Unbridled ! for this new step up at AP. I'll be back when I have more time to investigate all you have step up here to do. Looks very challenging and interesting with just a quick glancing about. God Bless Afraid I wrote at least 4 dz. reads. i must get those done! Thanks. The poem really created very clever clear menatal images. i liked the twist of snakes and horsesasses (which I believed to be men of that time?)

  • Le Moxie Mox
    February 20, 2004
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    mmmmmmwAA!

    I have just keeled over with laughter. Sooo jaunty! I think I'm in love.



    Mox