The moon, alone,
Taunts me from the heavens
With memories of you;
Should you feel the same, then
Our hearts would be as one
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Oh a beautiful poem , the moon is especially a symbol for lovers, as the full moon seems always to increase the feeling of loneliness and need to be with the beloved, in some ways it does link two hearts who though apart may still be together under the same moon and also joined together with that feeling of longing that both might feel even possibly at the same moment that they view the moon from their different spots. beautifully expressed.
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wonderfull
short and sweet, who says you have to use alot of words to be meaningful, sometimes the best way to say soemthing is to not speak.
BY the way. Great work. really...I dont know how to word this...dreamy I guess is the word I'm looking for. it has a dream like feel to it. well anyway keep it up and good luck
Lots of Love
Liz~~~ Aka The Crow -
I like this, but I am taken by the fact that, even in the knowledge that they can be as one, the moon is a taunting presencee - not reassuring...
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I love this, I'm really into short poetry at the minute. I especially love this, so much meaning in such few words. It's really beautiful!!
XxX Pixie-Rose OoO -
Now matter how far, our hearts will be as oneif we feel the same. Some things time will never change.
I love the way this was written in so few words, and placed under the same moon.
Very strong piece, complete with emotion and scene.
Andrew
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