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Now I understand!

Now I understand!
When to remember me
She vowed,
She said she would forget me,
But kindly!

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  • AndrewHide
    October 18, 2005
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    I think all English women should learn Japanese poetry, then maybe all my disappointments as I grew would have been as poetic.

    Andrew

  • Apple Blossom
    May 19, 2004
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    Understandable, when the time has come to move on, the time has come. Not much we can do about it, we can't hold onto some things forever. Well, I guess we could but it would be a lost cause wouldn't it? Hmm...I have forgotten a few folks but also kindly. aimee jo

  • Venus
    May 18, 2004
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    i like thsi peice emotional yet fulll of truth and very simple and easy going... great work on this!
    ~`Sara`~


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    May 7, 2004
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    there is something very sensational fold in this simple rhyme____ something very sweet n emotional.


  • AndrewHide
    May 7, 2004
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    I'm sure there is a very sweet tale behind this, even if with its sad end.
    I like this emotional piece, simple, but the thought here will resonate well.

    Andrew

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