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High In The Mountains By A Deep Ravine

High in the mountains by a deep ravine
inside my massive block, enclosed, alone —
but then brought down and stripped, I now am seen
against my will and destitute of stone.

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  • janejainejayne
    January 6, 2005
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    As we all feel at somtimes!

  • citrus sharp
    May 19, 2004
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    i dnt rly get this one

  • BlueWorlds
    May 18, 2004
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    ooooh.....I really like this. I like how it is short yet still very satisfying as a poem.
    I creates quite the image in your head when you read it.
    Therefore, I say very well done and just like everyone else, keep writing. Oh, and I agree, the shorest deep (and effective)poem I have ever read.

  • crazigirl2004
    May 18, 2004
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    i got that he was mad that he was seen in his motion of work and that he was never going to caver that marble for its whole identity was shown.

    ~*Kourtney*~

  • BDRomeo
    May 18, 2004
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    Short but good. Sympathetic and deep. The shortest deep poem I have ever read.

  • agazeley
    May 18, 2004
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    Michelangelo was in fact referring to a block of stone in a mountain quarry that contained one of his statutes yet to be sculpted – he often went to the quarries to supervise the removal of the stone he would use – and it is the finished stone statue stripped bare that is speaking in the poem.

    On several occasions Michelangelo implied that he didn’t carve or sculpt his statues – and that the statue was in fact already inside the rock, he simply cleared away the excess material to reveal what was already inside the stone. - Albert

  • LazulineBeaches
    May 18, 2004
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    OOH! Freakishly sympathetic....me, I mean...There's a lot in such a short work...amazing...

  • muffincontrol
    May 18, 2004
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    This evokes feelings of empathy towards the vunerability expressed, excellent write!

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