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Don't You See?

The day was hotter than words can tell,
So hot the jelly-fish wouldn't jell.
The halibut went all to butter,
And the catfish had only force to utter
A faint sea-mew — aye, though some have doubted,
The carp he capered and the horn-pout pouted.

The sardonic sardine had his sly heart's wish
When the angelfish fought with the paradise fish.
'T was a sight gave the bluefish the blues to see,
But the seal concealed a wicked glee—

The day it went from bad to worse,
Till the pickerel picked the purse-crab's purse.

And the crab felt crabedder yet no doubt,
Because the oyster would n't shell out.
The sculpin would sculp, but had n't a model,
And the coddlefish begged for something to coddle.

But to both the dolphin refused its doll,
Till the whale was oblidged to whale them all.

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  • mermaid7
    August 14, 2006
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    HA!

    Funny. Combine this with a trip to the beach--or to an aquarium.

  • Dragonshadowed
    May 20, 2004
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    While I was reading this, I kept imagining all of the creatures as cartoons, and that made me chuckle this morning. I agree with Open Eyes, that this is still a great poem today, and the humor is not entirely lost. I absolutely loved the play on words.

  • Open Eyes
    May 19, 2004
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    Full of good humor and ticklish fun! Whimsical, well thought out and well written. Even in this day and age, qualifies for a gem.

  • broken-spirit
    May 19, 2004
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    this is a great poem well done

  • CamboniMachine
    May 19, 2004
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    hehehe this is a great poem... very very clever great use of vocabulary and fantasic rhythm.

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