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The Outside Track


There were ten of us there on the moonlit quay,
    And one on the for’ard hatch;
No straighter mate to his mates than he
    Had ever said: ‘Len’s a match!’
"’Twill be long, old man, ere our glasses clink,
    ’Twill be long ere we grip your hand!"—
And we dragged him ashore for a final drink
    Till the whole wide world seemed grand.
            For they marry and go as the world rolls back,
                They marry and vanish and die;
            But their spirit shall live on the Outside Track
                As long as the years go by.

The port-lights glowed in the morning mist
    That rolled from the waters green;
And over the railing we grasped his fist
    As the dark tide came between.
We cheered the captain and cheered the crew,
    And our mate, times out of mind;
We cheered the land he was going to
    And the land he had left behind.

We roared Lang Syne as a last farewell,
    But my heart seemed out of joint;
I well remember the hush that fell
    When the steamer had passed the point
We drifted home through the public bars,
    We were ten times less by one
Who sailed out under the morning stars,
    And under the rising sun.

And one by one, and two by two,
    They have sailed from the wharf since then;
I have said good-bye to the last I knew,
    The last of the careless men.
And I can’t but think that the times we had
    Were the best times after all,
As I turn aside with a lonely glass
    And drink to the bar-room wall.

            But I’ll try my luck for a cheque Out Back,
                Then a last good-bye to the bush;
            For my heart’s away on the Outside Track,
                On the track of the steerage push.

Notes

The header graphic is by an unknown photographer and shows International passenger steamers moored along the wharves of Circular Quay in Sydney Harbour, Australia, about 1905. In the foreground are the ferry piers for cross-harbour passage to Manly and Watson Bay.

This poem was first adapted for singing by Gerry Hallom (UK), © 1982, and has been recorded more recently by Roll & Go on their CD ROLLING DOWN TO SAILORTOWN: http://www.rollandgoseasongs.com/

Charley Noble

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  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    September 25, 2008
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    Outside Track

    The last four lines were always part of the original poem. It was most of the singers of this poem who dropped the lines, and perhaps muddied the waters.

    Charley Noble


  • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
    September 24, 2008
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    I share the disquiet over the last four lines since it destroys my image of the meaning of "outside track". I understood it was an anglicised aboriginal phrase used to refer to the path walked by the dead and gone.
    If this is so, and it does seem to fit the early references, then why is the writer appearing to long to be there himself. It doesn't feel like a death-wish poem.
    I wonder if those closing lines were part of the original poem??


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    September 23, 2008
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    Outside Track

    Another friend from Australia explained that the term "push" means a gang or crowd, possibly with a lot of energy.

    Rufina-

    You do agree with my old Australian friend Bob Bolton on what the term "Outside Track" refers to.

    Charley Noble


  • Von Powell Moderators member
    September 23, 2008

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    Outside Track

    The Outside Track is 'away from Australia'. Outside the boundaries that is 'Home'. I feel that the men leaving Australia were perhaps moving to America (my thoughts only not based on any fact). The 'Steerage push' being the cheapest way to leave.


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    September 23, 2008
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    Outside Track?

    What Lawson meant by the expression "Outside Track" is subject to different interpretations:

    a reference to race track slang, in contrast to the "inside track"

    a reference to the wider world beyond colonial Australia

    a reference to the outer margins of a sheep ranch, well beyond the authority of the ranch owner where the sheep shearers and other ranch hands ruled

    But given the last four lines of this poem the Outside Track is a different concept than the Outback.

    The "steerage" is a reference to low cost ocean transport out of Australia.

    "Push" is slang for a "crowd."

    Any thoughts from you Australians?

    Charley Noble


  • Miss Faith
    September 22, 2008
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    I like it

  • trekkergirl
    September 22, 2008
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    I like this. Says a whole lot. Good history with it too in using the photo. Great job


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    September 22, 2008

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    Last verse?

    I've always been dissatisfied with the last verse:

    But I’ll try my luck for a cheque Out Back,
    Then a last good-bye to the bush;
    For my heart’s away on the Outside Track,
    On the track of the steerage push.

    Which I interpret as meaning the one left behind is going to also say good-bye to the Outback and leave as well. It kind of spoils the sentiment for me. Evidently those who sing this poem would also agree with me because I've never found that verse included on a recording.

    The first verse is also dropped by most singers but I do strongly object to that; it really sets the atmosphere.

    Charley Noble


  • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
    September 21, 2008
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    I just had to look up these words. I have joined in a chorus song based on this three times in the past few days and with the blending harmonies it was a wonderful experience.
    Now having read Lawson's original I am once again marvelling at his power with words.
    The last 4 lines of the first stanza make a very moving chorus.


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    October 20, 2005
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    There are many leaving songs. In this one the old gang is breaking up as one member ships back to the mother country. Those who are left behind feel the loss strongly, and as their numbers diminish year by year, become increasingly bitter.

    Cheerily,
    Charley Noble

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