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green in the field

green in the field
was pounded into
rice cake

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  • privacy deprived
    December 4, 2004
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    makes you think.. i almost think i know what your saying.. hah it was good though. bien!

  • myron
    November 13, 2004
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    this is an interesting one to ponder on...