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A hundred labourers

A hundred labourers
digging earth—
the long day

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  • Lotus Of Lakshmi
    January 30, 2005
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    Ah...the hard work of the labourers makes the day seem so long. Very vivid imagery here. Excellent work!
    -Charishma


  • AndrewHide
    August 5, 2004
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    It's even longer on ones own.
    The daily grind, again Shiki shows a glimpse of something special...
    the everyday person.

    Andrew