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In A Soldiers' Hospital 1: Pluck


Crippled for life at seventeen,
His great eyes seems to question why:
with both legs smashed it might have been
Better in that grim trench to die
Than drag maimed years out helplessly.

A child - so wasted and so white,
He told a lie to get his way,
To march, a man with men, and fight
While other boys are still at play.
A gallant lie your heart will say.

So broke with pain, he shrinks in dread
To see the 'dresser' drawing near;
and winds the clothes about his head
That none may see his heart-sick fear.
His shaking, strangled sobs you hear.

But when the dreaded moment's there
He'll face us all, a soldier yet,
Watch his bared wounds with unmoved air,
(Though tell-tale lashes still are wet),
And smoke his Woodbine cigarette.

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  • March 25
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    From guest lesbian (contact)
    same!


  • March 22
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    From guest Mimi (contact)
    sad poem ):

  • LittleMoon
    February 9
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    Words escape me, it is so moving. Sheila/LittleMoon


  • January 7
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    From guest jon (contact)
    made me cry


  • January 7
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    m

    From guest jon (contact)
    story touched my heart


  • January 6
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    sad

    From guest jon (contact)
    sad poem mad me cry


  • January 6
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    great

    From guest jon (contact)
    excellent poem


  • May 16, 2007
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    very touching poem.

    From guest Ji Hye Lee (contact)
    Eva Dobell is a female World War I poet, so it feels much smoother than Wilfred Owen's or Sassoon's poems. This poem even makes me really sad, because little boys had to experience war at a young age. Probably he never thought how horrible is the war. He might even thought war is for glorifying his own country, and it will make him honorable. However, In the real situation, war is not fun. War is real and bloody. He might experienced his friend's or relative's death. There are dangers everywhere in the war. Some of them die. Some of them become handicapped like the boy in this poem. Trench warfare is very disgusting and dirty. Mice and louse are everywhere, and soldiers can't clean everyday. They can't eat or drink enough, and they also can't sleep well. They probably miss their family and friends, but they don't know them selves about their future. I think it's very sad and touching story.


  • May 16, 2007
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    Very Sad.

    From guest Ji Hye Lee (contact)
    It makes me really sad that young boy had to join into the war. He probably thought war is glorious place to help his own country, but in the reality, that's not true. They probably experienced dirty and disgusting trench warfare among louse and mice. Not enought foods and drink...Dead people and dangers are everywhere...Some of them will be their relatives, family members or friends. Eva Dobell is the female poet, so I feel like her poem is more smoother than the other World War I poem. If you read Wilfred Owen's or Sassoon's poems, they are more realistic, animalistic and violent. This is such a good poem, and I love the picture too.


  • May 2, 2007
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    This poem

    From guest Zoe (contact)
    This poem broke my heart. The compassion shown by Dobell is outstanding. The rhyme scheme is equisite; and the four stanzas, each with five lines is stunning. I felt a real sense of attachment to the poem, it is now beautifully projected on an A4 sheet of paper in my bedroom. I read it every morning and feel a sense of happiness that I am alive once more. `

  • mermaid7
    January 20, 2007

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    This is another moving poem. The picture with this poem adds a powerful element. Dobell's voice comes through in this poem--as someone posted on 3/13/05. She conveys the moment of this young's person's lie to enter the military without judgment against him. She simply states the lie was "a gallant lie." My father lied about his age to enter the military--his effort to escape the racial world of Louisiana. He managed to travel the world ( a dream of his), but also had to serve in Viet Nam. He was not injured, but was in death's path many times. He rarely talks about the war experience, except with his military buddies.


  • March 13, 2005
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    Eva Dobell shows great amount of compasion and feeling in this poem, the awful sight of seeing a dying man, who is really a boy. She cares about the men so much who battle and fight in the war.