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Dawn

AN angel, robed in spotless white,
Bent down and kissed the sleeping Night.
Night woke to blush; the sprite was gone.
Men saw the blush and called it Dawn.

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  • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
    March 19
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    To guest Shae and others.
    The sprite (line 3)is a reference to the Angel (line 1). A sprite is thought of as some sort of mystical creature, both good and evil. I suppose Dunbar is using it here in its good sense in order to avoid repeating Angel since it is sometimes considered bad form to repeat the same word in a short poem.
    Whatever the reason I think Dunbar's words give a quaint reason for the rosy hue that one sometimes get in the sky around dawn.
    Jim


  • March 19
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    what is the sprite???

    From guest shae (contact)
    ima bite confused???<: what is the sprtie of the poem??


  • March 19
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    From guest Kristen (contact)
    This was a mesmerizing poem. It reminds me of a poem you woulld expect from a childrens book, yet sophisticated... It reminds me of a lullabye.


  • December 4, 2008
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    Write your own four lines

    From guest Leonard (contact)
    Golden brown skin Large supple breast An appetite again Christmas dinner at rest


  • November 1, 2007
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    Awesome

    From guest Tanzanite (contact)
    This was beautiful and has the flow of a lullaby almost. It is gentle and soft as a kiss and a blush would be. The piece is beautiful and deceptively simple. I am going to read more of this poet's work.


  • Claide
    March 17, 2006
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    Bliss

    His poetry is such a gift. This is gorgeous.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    September 12, 2004
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    This speaks of so much beauty in such a simple fashion - it has a quiet way of making a loud statement, beautifully executed by Mr Dunbar.
    ~Von~

  • Miykie
    September 12, 2004
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    A vignette takes the flesh of creativity from the bone of reality and devours a mean emotion...Great choice!

  • Being Karen
    September 11, 2004
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    That's really awesome! I love tales of origin like this...very clever

  • Anasuya
    September 11, 2004
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    Oh beautiful. And I NEVER see a four line rhyming poem like this. When it's short, it's always a haiku. lol. How completely charming this one was. It's an interesting way for me to explain to my kids what a sunrise is! Fantastic.

  • Jcsketch82
    September 11, 2004
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    This may be my favorit poem of all time, I was glad I could find it here. I love the simpleness of this poem and how powerful this is.

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