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Hades

Darkest clouds of blackest Hades,
  Whirling onward into space;
Full of forms of ghostly horrors,
  Madly join the phantom chase.


Earth below is lost in darkness,
  Waves like mountains strike the sky,
Whilst the lurid lightning flashes,
  And lost spirits shriek and cry.


Ne'er on earth was such dread darkness,
  Ne'er such horrors, ghostly forms;
Ne'er such strokes of sulphurous lightning,
  Ne'er such hellish terror storms.


And each vaporous home of thunder
  Changed to aspect yet more dark;
And their crashing loud artillery
  Followed close the 'lectric spark.


And each cloud with spirits damning,
  Teemed till mountains filled their spheres,
And their hideous, ghostly laughter
  Seemed devoid of hope and fears.


And their aspect seemed unnatural,
  Devilish was their face and form;
Peals of shrieking, ghostly laughter
  Quick increased, as did the storm.


Then that ghostly throng of spirits,
  Each with death's marks on its brow,
Danced and kept tune to the thunders,
  To the lightning's lurid glow.


Hark! the thunder crashes louder,
  'Tis the ghostly spirits' band;
But above the deafening echoes
  Are the curses of the damned.


Shuddering I, the scene beholding,
  Felt my breast with horror swell;
For along the clouds in fire,
  It was written — "This is Hell!"

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  • June 7, 2007
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    hey

    From guest shawn (contact)
    It was a long but good poem

  • apatheticpoison
    September 5, 2006
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    wow this is great!

  • Pandoras Death
    June 2, 2005
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    I don't think i could say any more then this I LOVE IT!

  • crimson rose avarus
    May 13, 2005
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    woah this is a good poem keep up the good work. i love it. it is very imaginative as far as the imagry goes in the piece so keep it up its awesome.

  • angelic scars
    May 12, 2005
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    wow, this is an awesome write. i lvoe it. it has a way of drawing you in and holding your attention to the very end. awesome, good job.

  • Broken-Wing
    March 5, 2005
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    this poem was un belive abler i loved it keeep uo the good work and never quit gotta love it.

  • Death7734
    February 11, 2005
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    Kewl

  • Kitten999
    January 1, 2005
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    O wow

  • Nam
    December 13, 2004
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    I feel Benjamin perhaps wrote this as a deterance of some kind, or he wrote it from scripture, which still would be, by most accounts, a deterance anyhow.

    It's a great piece, the flow and rhyme of the piece is excellent, and the storyline moves quite fluidly throughout the piece. I feel the angst is dead on.

    A great piece that Benjamin has written here.


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