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Gautama Christ

The names of God and especially those of His representative 
Who is called Jesus or Christ according to holy books and 
    someone's mouth 
These names have been used, worn out and left 
On the shores of rivers of of human lives 
Like the empty shells of a mollusk. 
However when we touch these sacred but exhausted 
Names, these wounded scattered petals 
Which have come out of the oceans of love and fear 
Something still remains, a sip of water, 
A rainbow footprint that still shimmers in the light. 
While the names of God were used 
By the best and the worst, by the clean and the dirty 
By the white and the black, by bloody murderers 
And by victims flaming gold with napalm 
While Nixon with his hands 
Of Cain blessed those whom he condemned to death, 
While fewer and fewer divine footprints were found 
    on the beach 
People began to study colors, 
The future of honey, the sign of uranium 
They looked with anxiety and hope for the possibilities 
Of killing themselves or not killing themselves, of organizing 
    themselves into a fabric 
Of going further on, of breaking through limits without stopping 

What we came across in these blood thirsty times 
With their smoke of burning trash, their dead ashes 
As we weren't able to stop looking 
We often stopped to look at the names of God 
We lifted them with tenderness because they reminded us 
Of our ancestors, of the first people, those who said the prayers 
Those who discovered the hymn that united them in misfortune 
And now seeing the empty fragments which sheltered those 
    ancient people 
We feel those smooth substances, 
Worn out and used up by good and by evil.

Notes

*Gautama is Buddha's family name


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  • mermaid7
    September 30, 2006
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    Very deep poem. I'm thinking about a book, I believe it is entitled Sunflower, in which Jewish Holocaust survivers were interviewed about their ability to forgive and if they were able to have faith in God again. So many bad things happen in the "names" of God/faith that it is easy to forget a True God is above being used like we are led to think. "While fewer and few divine footprints were found on the beach/People began to study colors...." is so well crafted. People went beyond the "names" and sought substance, and discovered the essense of God. Neruda really covers the gamut with the abuse that has taken place in the name of God, and he leaves a positive closing with, "We feel thos e smooth substnaces,/Worn out and used up by good and by evil." Despite everything, people find God and hope and ultimately, faith.

  • Portinari
    April 24, 2005
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    I like how this poem pointed out that the names of God have been pretty much worn out by now, but they still have meaning, even if that meaning is only connected to the people who once used them.


  • GaryCGibson
    January 10, 2005
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    I like this poem quite a lot. I haven't seen anything resembling this sentiment expressed in English before.

    People do often believe that because something has been experienced before it hasn't value or meaning still. Particularly since there have been corrupt commercial Christians from time to time some people believe that faith is invalidated and a waste of time-in error I should point out.

    For example cosmology is not invalid because it has been researched from pre-history already. It is always new as the experience of God is always new for each individual in each lifetime.