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Suicide Off Egg Rock

Behind him the hotdogs split and drizzled
On the public grills, and the ochreous salt flats,
Gas tanks, factory stacks- that landscape
Of imperfections his bowels were part of-
Rippled and pulsed in the glassy updraught.
Sun struck the water like a damnation.
No pit of shadow to crawl into,
And his blood beating the old tattoo
I am, I am, I am. Children
Were squealing where combers broke and the spindrift
Raveled wind-ripped from the crest of the wave.
A mongrel working his legs to a gallop
Hustled a gull flock to flap off the sandspit.

He smoldered, as if stone-deaf, blindfold,
His body beached with the sea's garbage,
A machine to breathe and beat forever.
Flies filing in through a dead skate's eyehole
Buzzed and assailed the vaulted brainchamber.
The words in his book wormed off the pages.
Everything glittered like blank paper.

Everything shrank in the sun's corrosive
Ray but Egg Rock on the blue wastage.
He heard when he walked into the water

The forgetful surf creaming on those ledges.

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  • February 20, 2007
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    From guest D. (contact)
    This doesn't flow. I feel like the phrases should end in different places, but it is beautiful diction, nonetheless.


  • February 11, 2007
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    From guest Alex (contact)
    i really enjoyed this poem but it is sad that she took her on life


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    January 25, 2007

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    Meaning?

    Scott-

    It don't look good for the feller heading out into the water.

    Maybe the title contains a clue?

    Charley Noble


  • January 25, 2007
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    From guest Scott Grason (contact)
    What is this about?


  • November 17, 2005
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    This is superb work, true art.


  • May 5, 2005
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    I really like this poem..is my favorite