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Sailor Town


Along the wharves in sailor town a singing whisper goes
Of the wind among the anchored ships, the wind that blows
Off a broad brimming water, where the summer day has died
Like a wounded whale a-sounding in the sunset tide.

There's a big China liner gleaming like a gull,
And her lit ports flashing; there's the long gaunt hull
Of a Blue-Funnel freighter with her derricks dark and still;
And a tall barque loading at the lumber mill.

And in the shops of sailor town is every kind of thing
That the sailormen buy there, or the ships' crews bring:
Shackles for a sea-chest and pink cockatoos,
Fifty-cent alarum clocks and dead men's shoes.

You can hear the gulls crying, and the cheerful noise
Of a concertina going, and a singer's voice —
And the wind's song and the tide's song, crooning soft and low
Rum old tunes in sailor town that seamen know.

I dreamed a dream in sailor town, a foolish dream and vain,
Of ships and men departed, of old days come again —
And an old song in sailor town, an old song to sing
When shipmate meets with shipmate in the evening.

Notes

From SAILOR TOWN: Sea Songs And Ballads, edited by Cicely Fox Smith, published by George H. Doran Co., New York, US, © 1919, pp. 11-12. An earlier edition of this book was published by Elkin Mathews, © 1914.

The last verse is the important one, as this poet muses over her 9-year stay in Victoria, British Columbia, after returning to England in 1913. Is there regret that she tried so hard to realize a dream, only to have it slip away?

Most major ports and harbours around the world would have had a "sailor town" in the days of sail. It would be a part of the main town or city that the sailors would go to be amongst their own type. This area had a reputation for having more bawdy houses and bars than other parts of the city (although recent research of ports such as New York tend to disprove this).

The important point from the sailor's point of view is that whatever continent or country he was in there was a good chance that he could make himself understood in such places. They spoke a common patois and the shops and taverns and boarding houses were often run by former sailors or their wives. They were a home-away-from-home that was welcome after the hardship of a long voyage.

"Blue Funnel freighter" is a ship belonging to the Blue Funnel Company. Different companies painted the funnels of the earlier steam ships in their house colours so they were easily recognised on crowded docks or when sailing into port.

"Barque" is a type of sailing boat not to be confused with a barge.

"Dead Men's Shoes" means just what it says. If a sailor were lost at sea his kit would be divided up between his mates for momentoes and the remainder sold off by the captain and, surprisingly often, the money sent to his family when the ship returned to its home port.

This poem was adapted for singing by Dick Miles (UK) as recorded on AROUND THE HARBOURTOWN, © 1989; he first ran across this poem when a friend showed him a book in 1987. Miles' adaptation was later recorded by Johnny Collins on NOW AND THEN, © 2000. Charlie Ipcar has also adapted this poem, in 2007, for singing using Miles's tune; a MP3 file may be accessed from this link: http://home.gwi.net/~ipbar/lyrics/sailortown.htm

The header-graphic, the frontispiece in SHIP ALLEY by the poet's brother Phil W. Smith, may actually portray Cicely Fox Smith on the prowl in sailor town, passing The Valiant Sailor tavern.

Jim Saville and Charley Noble

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  • terrible tyke
    September 22, 2006
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    This is one of Miss Fox Smith's best poems. It eloquently describes the atmosphere of Sailor Town, the area of a port anywhere in the world, that was dominated by those who earned ther living from the sea. The latitude and longitude might change but the nature of the place didn't. At first.
    Then
    Along the wharves in sailor town a singing whisper goes
    Line 1 might readily refer to the changes that were occuring as sail gave way to steam and some of the romance was disappearing. The very times Miss Fox Smith lived through and catalogued so well.
    The final verse, sadly, is all that's left of real Sailor Towns these days . . . A dream.


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    July 27, 2006
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    Wounded Whale a-sounding?

    This poem has been a favorite of mine for some time but I'm growing increasingly annoyed with the last line of the first verse:

    Along the wharves in sailor town a singing whisper goes
    Of the wind among the anchored ships, the wind that blows
    Off a broad brimming water, where the summer day has died
    Like a wounded whale a-sounding in the sunset tide.

    It seems a very ominous and dramatic line and is unsupported by the rest of the poem. I don't like to call this "wounded whale" a "red herring" but she would have done better if she used a line such as:

    As the sun sinks down to China on a crimson tide.

    Does anyone else find this line distracting or have some justification for it, other than "That's the way she wrote it!"?

    Charley Noble


    • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
      July 27, 2006
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      I might cavil a little at the apparent misuse of sounding which is more to do with movement than noise . The verse tends to emphasise the whisper sound.
      But that is not, I believe the writer's intention. I see a different comparison.
      The sun sinking into the sea could be compared to the whales tendency to dive when trying to escape the whaler's harpoon. Also the sight of water turned red by a dying sun seems a fair comparison to the red waters around a wounded whale.


      • Charley Noble Moderators member
        July 28, 2006
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        Sailor Town?

        Jim-

        Thanks for the feedback. No, I think CFS is using "a-sounding" in the proper sense of the whale diving down in the water, as an analogy to the sun sinking below the horizon. But I still find the image of a wounded whale sounding with blood spreading over the water overly dramatic and unsupported in the rest of the poem, which seems to me to have a more gentle nostalgic theme.

        Charley Noble


        • I-Like-Rhymes Moderators member
          July 28, 2006
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          We are in agreement CFS was meaning movement but the wording, especially when Dick miles sings to his own tune, or when it is read by a landlubber would suggest noise (sounding).
          As for it being out of place in memories I must disagree.
          With our displacement in time we view the death of a whale as a romantic or tragic thing. However it was just another commercial activity when this piece was written.
          The life and death struggle between men and whale would have been a time of strong memories in the mind of many old salts of the period. A contest of skill like a bullfight. As such it is, in the contexts of the time, a strong but not harsh nostalgic theme. It was just one more event to look back upon.
          Jim


          • Charley Noble Moderators member
            July 29, 2006
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            Whale A-Sounding?

            Jim-

            What you do say about the image of "a wounded whale a-sounding" being less charged with symbolic meaning in the early 1900's than today is certainly true. I withdraw my criticism.

            However, if I sing the poem (and I'm using Dick Miles' tune) I'll most likely change the phrase so that present-day listeners won't be distracted. That, of course, is an entirely different question.

            Cheerily,
            Charley Noble


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    March 28, 2006
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    Cacatua leadbeateri

    Pink cockatoos made me think of Australia's 'Major Mitchell' at first but no - they are more of an Inland bird. this could possibly be written about so many ports and harbours around the world. It's an interesting story line and Jim's explanatory notes help us non-seafaring folk to understand more about the life and times.

    Von


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    January 18, 2006
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    I'm thinking that the last verse may have some personal significance to CFS in that she probably composed this poem after returning to England from Victoria in 1913, and she knew by then that her best friend "Dan the Shantyman" had been lost at sea ("Lee Fore Brace"). In "Shipmates-1914" she was still hopeful that they would meet again but now she concludes that it was all a dream, "a foolish dream and vain...when shipmate meets with shipmate in the evening."

    Charley Noble


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    October 28, 2005
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    Sea shanty rivalist Johnny Collins (UK) sings an adaptation of this poem on his Now And Then CD. He sings it to a tune composed by Dick Miles. Collins uses the last verse as a chorus and the result is quite haunting.

    Charley Noble

  • Karmageddon
    August 19, 2005
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    This was superb.
    purely awesome.
    If I was asked to give my most critical review, it would be "Not everyone in the world is smart and therefore, this poem will not appeal to everyone."
    You WOULD have to be an idiot not to like this.
    The imagery was *perfect* the rhyming spot-on (none of that horrible forced rhyme that leaves a sour taste in my mouth as it scrapes off the tongue).
    it managed to take lines that, syllable by syllable actually DIDNT have the appropriate rhythym, and use them in ways to breathe life into them and instill a new type of rythm, reminiscent of old sailor songs and the sway of the boat on white-tipped swells.
    This is one of my favorite poems on the site.

    Edited on Aug 19, 9:05 p.m. because 'IMALOSER'.

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