Sap stirs near me, roots stretch and seize,
Sundering stones.
And rivers waken, start in monotones
Their later tunes.
Oaks bend their knotted knees
In labor, and the full earth groans
Like women big with their increase;
While underground my body lies,
With open eyes,
In this stiff pose of peace.
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While underground my body lies,
With open eyes,
In this stiff pose of peace.
My friend the end. I love that sction.
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I don't know what you meant by it, but it showed to me that even if you are not alive, the world will go on without you. I really do like it. It is a bit depressing the way you worded the last line though; as if you were just shoved underground and the world took no notice of you, only caring that you were 'peaceful'.
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wow this poem is deep and it speaks 2 me ya kno. it actually kinda scared me.
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i like this poem.but who the hell says neeto?
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this is totally awesome! keep up the great works.
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neeto poem. I like the personification. I wouldn't consider it dark poetry, but it is good poetry.
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"In this still pose of peace"....wow. Lol that doesn't sound too peaceful!!!!! This is cool
I like it. I think that you did a great job on this.....awesome 
----Shady
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nothing to say about this nothing at all nothing is worth saying the word is going to end soon and not later
amber
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