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I Want To Die While You Love Me

I want to die while you love me,
While yet you hold me fair,
While Laughter lies upon my lips
And lights are in my hair.
I want to die while you love me
And bear to that still bed
Your kisses turbulent, unspent
To warm me when I’m dead.

I want to die while you love me;
Oh, who would care to live
Till love has nothing more to ask
And nothing more to give?

I want to die while you love me,
And never, never see
The glory of this perfect day
Grow dim, or cease to be!

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  • October 7
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    From guest Joe (contact)
    Its funny how the meaning changes so much once you've lost your special love.


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    June 21, 2007

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    marvelous

    This is a poem with common yet unique idea. Much has already been written on this subject but still many aspects need elaboration. The poet has very successfully expressed her emotive feelings about love.


  • May 20, 2007
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    From guest Tiffany Solomon (contact)
    Me And My Boyfriend Love This Poem. It One Of are favorite Of Gergia Douglas Johnson


  • poetryality Moderators member
    May 9, 2006
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    I still tell my husband the exact words in the title of this brilliant poem. The rhyme is so perfect and the meter is lyrical. I love this!


  • September 24, 2005
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    I think that this is a wonderful poem. It is amazing in detail and feeling. I love it thank you for sharing it with me.

  • Carrie Ann
    April 16, 2005
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    this is truely a beautiful piece, to think of dying whilst at the peak of ones love for another,never wanting it to end