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Lee Fore Brace


There was ten men hauling on the lee fore brace
In the rain an' the drivin' hail,
An' the mile-long graybeards chargin' by,
An' the thunderin' Cape Horn gale.

(That dark it was, you scarce could see
Your hand before your face;
That cold it was, our fingers froze
Stiff as they gripped the brace.

An' "Christ!" says Dan, "for a night in port
An' a Dago fiddler's tune,
An' just one whiff o' the drinks again
In a Callao saloon!")

There was ten men haulin' on the lee fore brace
When the big sea broke aboard;
Like a stream in spate, a foaming flood
Right fore an' aft it poured.

The ship, she staggered an' lay still —
So deep, so dead lay she,
You'd think she could not rise again
From such a weight of sea.

There was ten men haulin' on the lee fore brace . . . 
Seven when she rose at last;
The rest was gone to the pitch-dark night,
An' the sea, an' the ice-cold blast.

An' one of them was Dago Pete,
An' one was Lars the Dane,
An' the third was the lad whose like on earth
I shall not find again.

An' I'll heave an' haul an' stand my wheel,
An' reef an' furl wi' the rest . . . 
For winds an' seas go on the same,
When they've took an' drowned the best.

An' it ain't no use to curse the Lord,
Nor it ain't no sense to moan,
For a man must live his life the same,
An' keep his grief his own.

An' I'll drink my drink an' sing my song,
An' nobody'll know but me
A lump o' my heart went down with Dan
That night in the wild Horn sea!

Notes

From SEA SONGS AND BALLADS 1917-22, edited by Cicely Fox Smith, published by Houghton Mifflin Co., New York, US, © 1924, pp. 92-93.

Life on board of an old time sailing ship was no pleasure cruise. Hours of hard, back-breaking and often dangerous work interspersed with short rests asleep (if you were lucky) below decks for days on ends and then short, calmer spells where you had to work just as hard cleaning and repairing.

This long exposure to shared danger created strong bonds of friendship and brotherly love between mariners. And the loss of a such a friend was at least as sad as the loss of a wife or parent.

Here the poet describes with chilling accuracy the loss of Dan from such a point of view. The frequent use of the name in her poetry makes me think she had a specific Dan in mind which makes the second half of the poem particularly moving.

This description of the incident displays her uncanny familiarity with shipboard life as hauling on the lee fore brace is one of the most dangerous jobs in a storm, with the bow plunging and rolling in mountainous seas.

"Mile-long greybeards" are large foam topped waves stretching wide across the ship's course.

"Brace" is one of the many thick ropes used to adjust the yards.

"Callao" is the largest and most important port in Peru.

This poem was adapted for singing in 1995 by Alan Fitzsimmons, as recorded on SEABOOT DUFF & HANDSPIKE GRUEL by Pinch o' Salt in 2000; an alternative musical setting was composed by Charles Ipcar as recorded on MORE UNCOMMON SAILOR SONGS in 2005.

The header graphic is by maritime artist Anton Otto Fischer, Charles Scribner's Sons, NY, © 1947, p. 31, and shows a crew hauling on the lee fore brace.

Jim Saville

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  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    February 28, 2006
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    Nice Comment

    Darcy-

    I'm pleased you like this poem. There has been a revival of interest in Cicely Fox Smith's poetry in recent years and I wish she were alive to appreciate it. Unfortunately she died some 50 years ago. But we do have her poems, and still have a 100 or so to post.

    Charley Noble

  • XxDarcyNicolexX
    December 25, 2005
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    Wow....very great work talent and effort put into this poem.I enjoyed reading this one.Keep up the great talent and work and you will go far!


  • Charley Noble Moderators member
    September 28, 2005
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    mantell-

    I think you've done a great job of describing what is going on in this poem which is a favorite of mine. If you review the working bio on this website you'll find a brief summary of her nautical experience, having sailed from England to the Pacific Northwest. She also spend 9 years in the Victoria/Vancouver waterfront areas working day jobs while she interviewed shipkeepers and other nautical folks that she'd encounter in the evening and on weekends. She continued to do that when she returned to England in 1913 and published over 40 books of poetry, short stories and articles that are primarily focused on the nautical life when commercial sail was in its final phase.

    I do very much appreciate your insight into the sailor's need to conceal the magnitude of the loss of a close friend, and I also suspect that "Dan" was actually one of the sailors that C. Fox Smith knew very well, and it's true that the name Dan is mentioned far more often than any other name in her many poems.

    Cheerily,
    Charley Noble, who has adapted many of her poems for singing


  • August 15, 2005
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    It is, as the previous commentators have noted, a very compelling story told within the tight bounds of a relatively short poem. When the poet writes that it was doubtful whether "the ship could rise again/From such a weight of sea," she creates an image of such a nautical disaster that is unequalled by any poet before or since, and the greatest poets from the time of Homer have touched upon this theme. It is also remarkable that the author of this poem is a woman, who, presumably, was never on a merchant ship or had much to do with sailors (I could be wrong). It is not the correct use of maritime terms, which any landlubber can glean from any number of sources, including other poems that use them to create a nautical air. What is remarkable about this poem is that the poet has so deeply entered the psyche of the sailor. When he loses his best friend (for Dan was that, even if he was also other things), the sailor feels that he must conceal the magnitude of that lost from the others, as if death severed all personal connections when men are cast on the sea, as distinct from a battlefield, where it is not uncommon for soldiers to be overwhelmed by a comrade's death and surrender to grief. Perhaps the plasticity of the sea, as opposed to level ground, makes death less an earthly fact than a mystical one. Or perhaps it is just the opposite: the immediacy of death and the likelihood of its repetition in a setting that allows no escape may make it impossible to sort out, much less express, one's feelings. Yet this loss, with its clear subtext--and that subtext is always there, from The Odyssey to Billy Budd--transcends for a moment those traditional conventions, since the poet (a woman) cannot conceive of love in abstract terms and gives it rather more definition than is generally found in works of this genre.


  • June 14, 2005
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    Came across a reference to this poem in The Last Grain Race by Eric Newby. Just had to look for it, & so happy to find this website.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    May 9, 2005
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    Such an exciting story within this work. the author, though appreciating the hardship of the times still manages to make it sound like a huge adventure.
    The "brace" is the line which attaches to the end of the yard, rather than to a sail. The "fore" brace fastens to the yard of the lowest sail of the foremast - the frontmost mast of the three on a traditionally rigged ship. The "lee" fore brace was on the side away from the wind.
    In heavy weather, with the ship heeled over and breaking through the waves, trimming the lee fore brace or the foresheet (the "sheet" was the line to the downwind or lee corner of a sail) were not only difficult, but the "wettest" - and most dangerous - jobs on the ship.


    Von

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