Tie your heart at night to mine, love,
and both will defeat the darkness
like twin drums beating in the forest
against the heavy wall of wet leaves.
Night crossing: black coal of dream
that cuts the thread of earthly orbs
with the punctuality of a headlong train
that pulls cold stone and shadow endlessly.
Love, because of it, tie me to a purer movement,
to the grip on life that beats in your breast,
with the wings of a submerged swan,
So that our dream might reply
to the sky's questioning stars
with one key, one door closed to shadow.
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Master poet!
Well, I've just typed a comment - spilled my heart about the beauty of this poem and the talent of Neruda...and now my comment doesn't show, lol. Anyway, this is how poetry, and especially love poetry, should be written! Yes, his metaphors are unique and rich and no one can write like this man! -
Master poet!
This is the way Neruda wrote his "sonnets" and I love the freedom that he brings into poetry. Of course his metaphors and images are just oustanding and so unique. This poem is the true Neruda. I agree that he has the most wonderful ability to take simple, familiar things and present them in the most unique and creative way - he is the one poet that makes me want to say "why didn't I think of that" - but then, there is only one Neruda. I love his love poetry and everytime I read one of his poem, I learn. -
Its real, love is real, poetry is real, everything he wrote was real. His realism lets you place actual objects in your own fantasy world.
This poem was a testament to love, and to wanting. Wanting another heart to feel what what you see. The imagery in this poem was perfect; it showed why he needed a heart to tie to his, and why everyone should find a heart to tie to theirs and expearience night.
This poem is what we aim for when you try to write a picture and persuade a soul. -
i dont think its overdone at all. i think how he says what he says is beautiful. he's an amazing writer. i love his description. I like the feeling I get from it-not only emotion, but his words paint pictures that you can almost touch.
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This one is too overdone. If I read this on someone's site, I would think it's schmaltzy.
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