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Ex-Voto Breton Church Model


Once on a day a Paimpol man
Promised a ship to the good St. Anne . . .

Name of a name! How the great seas roared,
Tossing their manes as they crashed aboard!
So large the ocean, the ship so small,
There seemed no hope she could live at all;
So in his need did the Paimpol man
Promise a ship to the good St. Anne.

Ah, such a ship! No thing of botches
A man might make in a couple of watches,
But his own ship, see you, the staunch goelette,
Named for St. Yves, with all sail set,
Her hull to scale and her rigging to plan —
A credit to him and to good St. Anne.

And the gale went down and the peril was past,
And ship and seaman came home at last;
And when "Pardon" dawned in the spring of the year,
Barefoot, bareheaded, in fisherman's gear,
True to his word came the Paimpol man
Bringing a ship to the good St. Anne.

What was the end of him? Who shall tell
Whether his fishing fared ill or well?
Whether he sleeps among churchyard graves
Or far from home in the restless waves,
Fathoms deep where the cold seas roll
From Rockall Bank to the rim of the Pole?

And his ship — did she moulder at last away
On a peaceful beach in some Breton bay,
Where the fishermen's bairns would climb and hide
The long day through round her weed-hung side,
Or pound to chips in a flurry of foam
On St. Gildas Isle within hail of home?

But here is the ship that a Paimpol man
Vowed on a day to the good St. Anne.

Notes

From SHIP MODELS by Cicely Fox Smith, re-published by Conway Maritime Press in 1972. Earlier published by Country Life Limited, London, UK, © 1951, pp. 25-26; first published in Punch magazine, Volume 183, November 16, 1932, p. 539.

Many early sailors were both religious and superstitious and would not dream of setting out on a voyage without visiting their favourite shrine. In some of these shrines there were models of the ships they would sail. These models (those that still remain) are the clearest descriptions of the earliest boats. This poem was composed by the poet after a visit to such a sailor's church in San Telmo in Las Palmas.

The name of the ship in the title of this poem, Ex-Voto, should be italicized but was not because it would interfer with searching for this poem on this website.

The header graphic is a photograph from the same book, p. 97, and shows this early model ship.

Jim Saville

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