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Deaths of Flowers

I would if I could choose
Age and die outwards as a tulip does;
Not as this iris drawing in, in-coiling
Its complex strange taut inflorescence, willing
Itself a bud again - though all achieved is
No more than a clenched sadness,

The tears of gum not flowing.
I would choose the tulips reckless way of going;
Whose petals answer light, altering by fractions
From closed to wide, from one through many perfections,
Til wreched, flamboyant, strayed beyond recall,
Like flakes of fire they piecemeal fall.

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  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    October 27, 2007

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    calling out: 'Oh what a ride" as the light dims. I like this very much. the poet is aware of death but is not going to go blindly or quietly - amazing insight into another persons thoughts.