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Couplet 11

Farsi Couplet:
Mun tu shudam tu mun shudi,mun tun shudam tu jaan shudi
Taakas na guyad baad azeen, mun deegaram tu deegari


English Translation:
I have become you, and you me,
I am the body, you soul;
So that no one can say hereafter,
That you are someone, and me someone else.

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  • Ahkam Moderators member
    January 5
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    Very nice

    the verse reads, ' let us change our souls, our bodies, I be the body , you be the soul sothat no one can have any objection on our being so close to one another, let we be so close to one another that no body can even distinguish between you and me'
    wow what a piece of love,


  • September 26, 2007
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    From guest Noor (contact)
    Every word is full of love