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A Hymn To God The Father

Wilt thou forgive that sin where I begun,
        Which was my sin, though it were done before?
    Wilt thou forgive that sin, through which I run,
        And do run still, though still I do deplore?
            When thou hast done, thou hast not done,
                For I have more.

    Wilt thou forgive that sin which I have won
        Others to sin, and made my sin their door?
    Wilt thou forgive that sin which I did shun
      A year or two, but wallow'd in, a score?
          When thou hast done, thou hast not done,
              For I have more.

  I have a sin of fear, that when I have spun
      My last thread, I shall perish on the shore;
  But swear by thyself, that at my death thy Son
      Shall shine as he shines now, and heretofore;
          And, having done that, thou hast done;
              I fear no more.

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  • February 15
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    Other

    From guest Pat Williams (contact)
    I liked your site.


  • November 5, 2008
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    beautiful

    From guest mohit gupta (contact)
    this poem realizes a man about their bad and good things he/she done in his/her life.when a person realizes that he/she has done some big mistake then he/she goes to church for confession.


  • April 26, 2007
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    Peace and Forgivness after Death

    From guest Miss Sadia (contact)
    the conclusion represnts a projection into the ultimate state evry one wants to achiv, peace and forgivness after deathand should serve as inspiration to the congregation singing the hymn.

  • colagne
    March 12, 2007
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    WHAT IS POETRY

    BY READIN THIS POEM U REALIZ WHAT LIFE IS....


  • November 29, 2006
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    excellent

    From guest Big John (contact)
    Great poem i have to analyze it for AP college english at CU and this is by far the best poem i have read by JD.

  • Trapped Rage
    October 24, 2006
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    Beautiful

    I have to analyze this poem in English. It was confusing the first few times I read it, but I think I've got the gist now. All I can say is that the rhyme scheme and the reference to the Three Fates make it awesome! So does the old vernacular. ^^

  • Trapped Rage
    October 24, 2006
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    Beautiful

    I have to analyze this poem in English. It was confusing the first few times I read it, but I think I've got the gist now. All I can say is that the rhyme scheme and the reference to the Three Fates make it awesome! So does the old vernacular. ^^


  • GaryCGibson
    December 24, 2004
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    The rhetorical technique is sort of a paradox. JD new that original sin was forgiven if he accepted Jesus as his personal savior.


  • MargaretG
    November 8, 2004
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    The last stanza is the most moving for me. After a life of sin, the greatest of which is to doubt the mercy of God, assurance that the love of Jesus continues convinces him he has nothing to fear.


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    March 20, 2004
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    great

    " Wilt thou forgive that sin which I have won
    Others to sin, and made my sin their door?
    Wilt thou forgive that sin which I did shun
    A year or two, but wallow'd in, a score?"
    though full of sin but what a divine thought.great!


  • October 10, 2003
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    CONFUSING


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