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A Broken Appointment

You did not come,
And marching Time drew on, and wore me numb.
Yet less for loss of your dear presence there
Than that I thus found lacking in your make
That high compassion which can overbear
Reluctance for pure lovingkindness' sake
Grieved I, when, as the hope-hour stroked its sum,
You did not come.

You love not me,
And love alone can lend you loyalty;
-I know and knew it. But, unto the store
Of human deeds divine in all but name,
Was it not worth a little hour or more
To add yet this: Once you, a woman, came
To soothe a time-torn man; even though it be
You love not me.

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  • August 29, 2008
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    Error

    From guest Danielle (contact)
    I believe that it is
    "You love not me", not "you love me not"
    In this manner it flows more, and is accurate.


    • rufina caraid Moderators member
      August 30, 2008
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      "You Love not me"

      is correct for line numbers 9 & 16. I have checked with several reputable sites and made the necessary correction. Danielle, thank you for bringing this to our attention.
      Regards, Von - Oldpoetry Team

  • BlueJohnHook
    October 15, 2007

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    A simple message. Compassion. And the lack in finding it in someone he likes, hurts him more than her simply not coming when she said she would.


  • May 28, 2007
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    a really nice poem

    From guest Dave (contact)
    Ilked it alot. It is hard to understand at first, but then you realise what it's about.

  • Now you see me
    March 3, 2007
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    ....

    What about Hardy's lost dead lover, Emma?


  • January 25, 2007
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    From guest Svetla (contact)
    I see people find this poem very sad. Be as it may, the feeling in it is so intense and pure that it makes the emotions beautiful and not sad, but melancholy.


  • January 25, 2007
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    From guest Svetla (contact)
    A BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL POEM ...


  • December 6, 2006
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    you?

    From guest Jamie (contact)
    studying this poem for an a level presnetation found some opf your comments useful. In my text book it says that the you he refers to my be a woman named Florence Henniker who he met and formed a strong one sided attchment with, and therefore it is a story of his unrequited love.

  • photogal85
    March 19, 2006
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    very sad poem

    Thomas hardy had a strong disbelief in God and in the beginning of this work we are led to believe that he is talking about his lack of faith. However, its not until line 14 that we realize he is referring to a woman. This is when we realize that he is probably talking about his neglect for his wife. He realized later in his marriage he had not been fair to her. Truly sad.


  • January 25, 2006
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    to me, this poem is about a poor guy can't get laid, even by someone who's easy. it's sad like being rejected by a hooker is sad.


  • October 22, 2004
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    a typical Hardy poem. A strong scepticism about life even and the universe which is indifferent about human suffering. Love and pain are intermingled and there is a strong expression of regret.


  • Nobody126
    July 15, 2004
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    This is too sad...still a complicated thought...hardy is hard and wonderful...


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    May 23, 2004
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    "You love me not,
    And love alone can lend you loyalty;"
    Such a great universal thought in such simple words___ very nice!!!


  • March 21, 2004
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    great

    This Poem very sad, since that Thomas Hardy had a wife named Emma that past away in 1912. My guess is that Mr. Hardy wrote this poem talking about his wives death. This Poem is very sad but well wrote and I wish that more people could enjoy this wonderful poem.


  • February 28, 2004
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    this poem made me very sad.I wonder who is the one he is waiting?His wife?

  • kalifornia
    February 21, 2004
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    I don't know why i'm picking poems that hurt the heart. But this was an excellent verse of lost love and the reconciliation of one's heart to that lost love. He realized it. how sad.


  • December 14, 2003
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    Wonderful

    A soulful poem of love lost and love needed.


  • AndrewHide
    August 12, 2003
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    To wait that everlasting hour, alone. I wonder how the missing party would have faired, proberly with far less poetic reward.

    Andrew

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