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A Lament

O World! O Life! O Time!
On whose last steps I climb,
Trembling at that where I had stood before;
When will return the glory of your prime?
No more --Oh, never more!

Out of the day and night
A joy has taken flight:
Fresh spring, and summer, and winter hoar
Move my faint heart with grief, but with delight
No more --Oh, never more!

Notes

A glimpse at Shelley's original draft, give us an insight to how he had built this poem up.
His notes show how he was working on the meter and shape even before he had the words...

Ah time, oh night oh day
Ni na ni na, na ni
Ni na ni na, ni na
Oh life O death, O time
Time a di
Never time
Ah time, a time O-time
time !

Published by Mrs. Shelley, Posthumous Poems, 1824.

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  • RentedHouse
    January 8, 2006
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    I enjoy that the notes were included, it gives a bit of a view to a poets inner workings.


  • December 13, 2004
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    I agree that Percy Shelley is just as majestic as Emily Dickenson, but I think Sylvia Plath's tormented mind is more alluring to me.


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    December 20, 2003
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    Sweet Like Pain

    Shelley is as majestic as Emily Dickenson Just look at the rhyme Move my faint heart with grief, but with delight
    No more -Oh, never more!
    I love his extempore style

  • philophant
    December 7, 2003
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    delightful....more of a chime than a mere rhyme